Advances in DNA Analysis Affect Tragedy in Sunset!

So the crux of my work in progress, Tragedy in Sunset, is that a young woman is assaulted and raped, but is too scared to give a name to the police. They have a DNA sample, but it doesn’t lead to any new results.

Well, all of that might be about to change, and I’ll have to figure out how it affects my story. According to an article in the San Diego Union Tribune, DNA samples are being used to match alleged perpetrators to a crime scene by matching the sample against a family tree. The suspect is then narrowed down and an arrest made.

This was used most effectively in 2018 to find the Golden Gate Killer, so named because he raped over 50 women and killed 13 people in the years between 1974 and 1986 in California.

When I first wrote Tragedy in late 2016, this data wasn’t available like it is now. That’s the problem when writing a story that relies on systems and processes that are apt to change wildly from year to year.

The basic plot is still fine and will provide quite the story, but I will probably have to do a little modifying as I go.

One idea, thanks to one of my friends, is to bring up the privacy issues that go with matching publicly-available DNA samples when handling crime evidence. I think that might very well figure into the rewrite of Tragedy. Stay tuned to see how it plays out!

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My Acknowledgment Page

Every writer, in the beginning of every book, will discuss those who helped him or her get to where he or she is now. In particular, the acknowledgment section will talk about how this person or that person helped them with research, editing, agent representation, etc in order to get the point across.

As I am mostly a short form writer published in newspapers and magazines, I don’t get to include an acknowledgment in my work. Yet there are countless people who have helped me in this process. This post is just the beginning of it all.

My mother was the first to see and develop my love for writing. She helped me write when I was too young to put words together. She would then have my dad take my “books” to work and make copies. I’d take them to my 1st Grade Class in Girard, KS, and distribute them. I doubt anyone remembers that.

In the 3rd Grade, Mrs. Byrd let me read aloud my stories to my classmates. I will forever remember her as encouraging me, even though at that age, I was basically retelling the stories I was reading at the time (Call of the Wild and White Fang).

Fast-forward to high school and I’m writing like a madman, pushing out hundreds and thousands of words onto the computer screen. We didn’t have a lot of extra money back then, so while some of my friends had Nintendo systems (the original!), or computers with AOL, we didn’t. I would look at ads in magazines and see that I couldn’t afford a computer, but I did buy a typewriter with some money I made while mowing lawns or bailing hay.

Anyway, my high school Lit teacher, Mrs. Johnson, saw my desire to write and would check out a laptop to me as often as I wanted one to take home for the night. I would write and write on that borrowed laptop. I’ll forever be grateful for her acknowledgment of my dream.

My wife now fulfills that role of encourager and champion. She is as happy as I am when another article is published, no matter how little I get paid. When asked, she edits. Mostly, though, she encourages me to pursue the dream. Someday, when I hit it big, I know she’ll let me spend the money on that new boat I’ve been wanting to (let me dream, honey!).

There are others of course, including my first newspaper editor, Warren Watkins, Diane McDougal (editor at EFCA Today). I’ve written about Ms. McDougal before, as well as Mr. Watkins. I’ll cover others periodically as time goes by. If you’ve been instrumental in my writing career, just know your time is coming!


Newspapers- One of my favorite venues

A lot of freelance writers shun newspapers. Some of them do it for good reason. The turnaround time is almost immediate (meaning you don’t have a lot of time to write the piece), the pay is very low (in most cases), and the readership is small and shrinking (overall).

These freelancers, however, miss a great opportunity by bypassing newspapers in their publishing careers. Some of my best writing opportunities have come from newspapers.

In fact, the Sherwood Voice, which at the time was run by Warren Watkins, gave me my first real shot at writing a weekly column. I covered local schools, the monthly city council meeting, and even an occasional public event like Cinderella (below) and the Alabama farewell tour. Warren Watkins, and the owners of the Sherwood Voice, allowed me to gain some amazing experience into newspaper publishing and writing. Do not pass up the opportunity to work for one if you get the chance.

Some of the local rags I’ve been published in:

Sherwood Voice (Clips below)

Lake County News-Sun

Girard Press

I’ve also written for small Christian papers:

Christian Courier

The Christian Journal

Following are a few clips from Sherwood Voice:


Review 01 Cinderella