Published Clip Addendums – Author S. Daniel Smith https://sdanielsmith.com Author Website Sun, 08 Oct 2023 13:49:08 +0000 en-US hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.5 More than “Writing what you Know” https://sdanielsmith.com/more-than-writing-what-you-know/ Wed, 09 Aug 2023 00:50:00 +0000 https://sdanielsmith.com/?p=375

This is a companion post for my article appearing in the Virginia Dept of Wildlife Resource’s fishing notes. The article is titled, “Small Water, Big Fun: Retention Ponds can be great places to Hone your fishing skills.”

I’m dedicating this article to John Massey, my father-in-law. John never judged me for not knowing how to fish and has always been a willing fishing guide for his granddaughter Hannah. Thank you, John.

There’s an old writing adage that goes, “Write what you know.” That served me well for my first ever published piece back in 2000, when I wrote about my buddy and I ministering on USS Mobile Bay (CG-53). Preaching and the Navy were all I really knew back then, outside of a little farming, so selling an article based on my ministry at the time was the easiest thing to do.

Since then, I’ve written about cystic fibrosis in addition to topics related to ministering in the Navy, but by and large, the old adage has held true for me. With a child affected by cystic fibrosis, that too is something I know.

That hasn’t stopped me from writing about other topics, and it shouldn’t stop you from it either. The topic of my most recent published piece, “Honing your skills at the Retention Pond,” published by the Virginia Dept. of Wildlife Resources, shows this in full color. I didn’t know how to fish, but my daughter wanted to, so I had a choice to make. I could disappoint her, or I could learn a new skill. Turns out, fishing isn’t all that hard and becoming decent at it is fairly straightforward.

By the way, for those coming from the DWR website, I had to cut out a section on fishing for catfish in retention ponds. It’s too bad, because it was great info. Here is that cut information for those also trying to land the cats:

“Another fish species that offers pond anglers an attractive fight is the ubiquitous channel cat. These catfish are plentiful in Virginia waters and have amazing senses of taste and smell. They sometimes croak when caught as well, which makes for an interesting experience. “Use a Carolina rig, aka fish finder rig, to fish bait on the bottom,” says McCrickard. The DWR has an informative video that shows how to fish for channel catfish with this setup.”

The same goes for writing something I’ve never written about before. While I’ve never considered myself much of an outdoorsman, I know what I’ve learned so far and turns out, it made a really good article. I could apply what I’d learned as an amateur angler, combined with my interview skills (thank you, Alex McCrickard!) and get a really good product.

So here’s to learning new things, stepping out of comfort zones, and writing about new loves.

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Writing for Newspapers https://sdanielsmith.com/writing-for-newspapers/ Mon, 15 Aug 2022 11:21:00 +0000 https://sdanielsmith.com/?p=187 A lot of freelance writers shun newspapers. Some of them do it for good reason. The turnaround time is almost immediate (meaning you don’t have a lot of time to write the piece), the pay is very low (in most cases), and the readership is small and shrinking (overall).

These freelancers, however, miss a great opportunity by bypassing newspapers in their publishing careers. Some of my best writing opportunities have come from newspapers.

In fact, the Sherwood Voice, which at the time was run by Warren Watkins, gave me my first real shot at writing a weekly column. I covered local schools, the monthly city council meeting, and even an occasional public event like Cinderella (below) and the Alabama farewell tour. Warren Watkins, and the owners of the Sherwood Voice, allowed me to gain some amazing experience into newspaper publishing and writing. Do not pass up the opportunity to work for one if you get the chance.

Some of the local rags I’ve been published in:

Sherwood Voice (Clips below)

Lake County News-Sun

Girard Press

I’ve also written for small Christian papers:

Christian Courier

The Christian Journal

Following are a few clips from Sherwood Voice:

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My Multi-Site Church Problem https://sdanielsmith.com/multisite-church/ Sun, 14 Aug 2022 09:55:15 +0000 https://sdanielsmith.com/?p=140 This is an article addendum from 2018. I loved writing this article and hope you will enjoy the study into church structure as well.

This post is a companion piece for an article I wrote for Evangelical Free Church of America. You can read it here.

I thought they were all egotistical megalomaniacs bent on making Outreach’s 100 fastest growing churches list, to be quite honest. I didn’t think there could be any way that a pastor at a multisite church could possibly be interested in spreading the gospel of Jesus Christ.

Surely they had to water down the gospel in order to have more than one site!

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This became a problem for me in 2017. When my family moved back to San Diego to take a new position in the Navy, I tried to focus on churches that only had one location. I was bound and determined to avoid multisite churches like the plague.

One by one, the churches we visited just didn’t seem to quite fit. While checking around, I did begrudgingly go to two multisite churches in my neighborhood. One of these visits was to Legacy Church in Tierrasanta. Much to my dismay, both of them were very good.

I went back to other single-site churches, hoping that one of them would be our match. They weren’t. Instead, the multisite churches were great, meaning that they preached the true gospel. I started to change my thinking on the issue. Could multisite churches be more than just ego boosts for their pastors?

As I learned more about Legacy Church, I came to realize that the pastor usually travels from the first location to the second location and back to cover all three services. In many ways, Legacy Church was emulating the Methodist circuit riders of old. Instead of covering miles of a frontier or a set of rural communities, however, Legacy covers La Mesa, CA and the Tierrasanta neighborhood of San Diego.

Then I thought: “This is not how I thought multisite churches worked. I wonder if there are other models as well.”

That thought officially launched my research into multisite churches, followed quickly by a query to the editor of EFCA Today, Diane McDougal. She ok’d the project on the understanding that final approval would come after it was complete. I began my research with Dr. Larry Osborne of North Coast Church in San Diego. Dr. Osborne was great to work with, as was his administrative assistant, Amanda Hoffman. She worked out a schedule that met both Dr. Osborne’s needs and mine as the writer. Our talk lasted about a half hour.

First question: What is the Gospel? I figured…hey, if they weren’t about the gospel, then I’d know my research could end. The gospel is the most important thing, as far as I can tell, so I started my questions with that.

He answered with I Corinthians 15, which encompasses the death, burial, and resurrection. When I asked him why he started there, he replied, “I figured that what the apostle Paul describes as his gospel is good enough for me as a working description.”

Ok, so far so good. Turns out one of the site pastors for North Coast also had a solid definition. Jay Foulk, who oversees the San Marcos/Escondido campus, said the gospel was, “the good news that through Jesus Christ’s life, death and resurrection, we can be saved from our sins through faith in Him.”

Wow. So maybe this is not only, not bad, but maybe good. My shell was beginning to crack. I still didn’t want to go full bore, but around this time, Alicia and I were regularly attending a multisite church (Legacy), so I figured I needed to get to the bottom of it soon.

I reached out to Nathan Miller, who oversees the site pastors for Christ Community Church in the Kansas City metro area. Nathan was likewise easy to talk to and a gracious subject. As we talked about the definition for the gospel, he added, “No matter what we’re preaching, we ask, ‘How do we get to Jesus?’”

Whereas North Coast Church utilizes a single preacher each week who preaches to all locations via video, Christ Community Church utilizes a model wherein each site’s pastor preaches each week on an agreed topic with agreed-upon points. They meet each week to talk about the upcoming sermon in order to provide a consistent gospel message. In both models, local worship leaders provide the musical leadership to their respective sites.

The rest of the interviews went very well. I was more than satisfied by the answers given. By the time I had finished my first draft of the article, I had become comfortable with joining Legacy Church.

We are now a part of Legacy’s Tierrasanta campus, growing as a family under the leadership of Curt, Todd, Troy, and the rest. And I’ve come to learn just how impacting multisite churches can be in the multiple communities they serve in. I’m probably not ready to go to a service where the only interaction I have with the pastor is on a video screen, but I am comfortable with the model we have at Legacy, and I’m comfortable with telling people about North Coast Church (for my San Diego friends who aren’t in my neighborhood). For those I know in Kansas City, I highly recommend Christ Community Church as well.

As a final note, I turned in my final draft to the new editor, Abby Farson Pratt, at 750 words. Diane liked the articles tight and economic. Abby, while appreciating tight writing, also wanted to explore the issue more, giving me a set of questions she wanted answered for the next draft. I went back to the pastors I had worked with on the project and, ever gracious, they answered the new round of questions. I turned in the new article at approximately 1200 words. That just goes to show that it’s vital to know what your editor wants when he or she wants it.

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